Banned: Cheating
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Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn
imma start with I.E., wackest i ever seen you come...wow!!!, your flow was not on point, it wasnt handlin, and choppy with messed up structure*elevate*...on the positive note, besides all the mess up's, you had a couple good punches, and rhymes in your flow, but i think there were too many predictable lines, and thats wat did it for you, too easy
manipulation: nice flow, nice structure, and you had some good punches and multies in there that i seen, *good shit*, you need to work on your rhyming also, the only difference about your and his, is that your was clever, and you worded it right...*elevate on that*, lookn at the end of each line, the last words are similiar, that could hurt u in other battles, but *good flow*
overall: ya'll both need to elevate...work on your rhymings, and stick to your points, to many *personal* changes could hurt you
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