Voted For: Decree Wun


Good topicals y'all

Decree......Goood story, its was entertaining, imagery was tight and flow was on point throughout, you had nicely place multies not too many and none were forced, structure was on point, you never vered off topic and you took the topic outside the normal math struggles but still stayed with the original subject very nicely written piece

Grade: B

Ingenious.........also a decent story your flow was good, structure was good but your story was weak it was blan and didn't surprise you did the basic math struggles story, you gotta be more creative, but your multies was good, vocab coulda been alil stronger but overall you were pretty much even in all categories except for the storyline, but it was very close match decree jus edged it by a little

Grade: B-

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