Voted For: ...God...

open: God, very good opener
close: God, nice closer...funny shit!
personals: Tie, Both had ok personals
metas: Tie, both had them
punches: God, way harder
multis: God, very good multis, especially in closer, great job

God: you took this one easly as you can see ^^^
You had great punches and even better multies...
Structure was excellent and great vocab, just gotta watch at the end cause the second last line was short and threw it off a little bit, but I loved it all, great stuff...

Drag: I think you have some elevatin to do son...
you gotta find a better structure first of all because that look just terrible...I donno if its an audio structure or what but its gotta go. Secondly Vocab needs uppin and Multies need uppin. Finally, you gotta throw some harder punches, I wasnt really feelin those, personals were ok tho...nice try man...

win: ...God...

Please take the time for me, as I do for you...
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