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Originally Posted by R-Rated
Hold Up...Turn The Mic Back On..
Aiyo Check It..
I've Seen Realistic Dreams..But Your Verse Is By Far-Fetched..
Stretched To The Limit..Has Messier Lines Than A Picaso Sketch..
No word play, mediocre punch, easy to think up..
Etch Ya Nutz..Oh Shit..I Forget You Have No Hair..Nor Puberty..
Balder Nutz Then The People With Cancer and No-Immunities..
Your kinda gay for talking about nuts cuz.. and there was no punch line, this is a weak as meta.. no real personal
Strap A Bomb Device To Ya Tongue Grab Your Arteries and Slice..
Suicide The Only Way..You Could Spit Dope If I Became A Poltragiest..
Poltragiest? learn how to spell, plus that didn't make sense..
Get Tuned..Like A G String..Dropped From O'Donnalds Sex Fling..
Ring Ya Neck With A Bar Of Dope Threads..Cause Thats The Next Thing..
No Punch, Pretty Violent, No personal either, no multies.. D/R would vote for you..
I Stretch Ya Neck To The Extent..People Calling You Armstrong..
I'm Armed Long With Armed Bombs Leave Your Hood-Hopped Like JKwon..
Eminem Said That first line in a freestyle before, you bit that..
Wordplay on 2nd line was killin me, but the jkwon rhyme killed yo sequence
Yea...Just Sum Bars...Waiting For The Rest To Respond Back..
~R~
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ALL IN ALL, NO GOOD PUNCHES, NO PERSONALS, NO GOOD WORDPLAY..
A.I Is ON YOUR DICK IF THEY LIKE THAT OR THEY ARE IGNORANT, AND I PUT THAT ON GOD.... PEACE,I"M OUT FOR A MINUTE,I"M GONNA KEEP MY WINS AWAY FROM HATE VOTES AND REMAIN A VET LIKE JAY-Z, SO EVEN IF YA"LL DISS ME BACK, I WON"T BE HERE, BUT I DOUBT THAT ANYONE IN THAT GROUP CAN COME HARD ANYWAYS, YOU ARE ALL FAILURES..I'M OUT, PEACE.. P.S, I've Checked, The Whole Crew is Whack, Like The Guy Above Me..
SinCERLY YOURS
ONE OF THE GREATEST EVER..