sorry, wasn't finished...

ok no metas in his verse or multi's but his verse was put together better....

fem: ya style was mediocre... i know ya new but i felt you could have done way better than what you did... if you heard that on the radio you'd prolly be ready to call the station up and cuss out the deejay... if it ain't hot to you when you say it to yaself then don't spit it... work on ya structure and throw more punches... you'll get it one day