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Voted For: String9487
yo... this was some loonnnnnngggg shyt.it almost didn't keep my interest. Yo G... ya might wanna change ya name.... i thought you'd be much better than what you were... ya first bar was on point but everything after that was ... well... blah!
I guess ya structure was ok but ya rhymes.... poor choices... no originality or creativity... boring to read... no meta's or multi's, no personals or hard-hitting punches... just work on it
String had me laughing for the most part... not the greatest verse I ever read but it was quite amusing...lol...that shyt with..."admit the fact/ God gonna need Buddha and Allah to win this match"... that's some funny shyt! i gotta give it to string but ...yeah... it was a lot harder to judge than what I made it out to be... G almost won but his verse bored me... if he woulda spiced it up a little he woulda won.
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