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Old 08-13-04, 02:34 AM   #19
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ok... wasn't really feeling this battle until I saw this line:

i dont rap 4 just chicks n sex,da get rid of ppl like u n get some checks
no disrespect but dont ruff's records look like da system's guest...

wow!... most powerful line in the whole battle and that alone was the deciding factor... both guys could use some elevation... more wordplay,metas,multi's,vocab,originality,creativit y... structure was ok for both.... marv... ya might wanna explain ya opener....
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