Thread: Proper Intro To $LXDiesel
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Old 08-13-04, 05:54 AM   #9
BrOTheRP.A.R.A.
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ya your shit was good 6/10 flow:4/10 punches 7/10 wordplay 5/10
you shuld work on vocab you didnt have to much rhymes in there but you had some good ones ight
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