Wel.. your heart was in the right place

Man i dont know how i would feel if my mum was sick... it's got alot of potential i think you need to elevate but your doing good bro.. You still 21? but you need to get a better rhyme struc.. like bust me and belive me dont rhyme home boy but it was aiight ima give it 7.1/10.

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