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Old 08-13-04, 02:39 PM   #13
Demon Pyrokronix
Flyweight
 
Posts: 130
From: England
This was feedback posted for Wite Warrior

IP:

I wasn'ty really feeling this one Wite. W. I thought some of the multies where played and you tried to cram too many ryhmes in the verse.You're opener was your best, but none of the others stood out,.

MC Wrapper yours was a lot betetr and was a much more decent attempt at rap. Some of the multies were well executed and most (if not all) of the punches hit in a variety of hardneass levels.

V/ MC Wrapper.

peace.
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