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Old 08-13-04, 02:51 PM   #9
The Black Plague
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Voted For: ...God...

Close battle in my mind, but God takes this in my mind, he had a more consistently strong verse... String ya verse was nice, but it was up and down to me, like ya opener was tight, but ya next line was weak.. It was kinda like this trhoughout ya verse, up and down... God you had nice punches, a nice rhyme scheme too, and ya personals connected too, even tho ya struc was off u flowed nice... String you also had nice flow, but your weak punches trhoughout brought down ya verse, not a bad drop just inconsistent... V/ God
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