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Old 08-13-04, 04:20 PM   #26
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Voted For: Ice Pick


diss cat gotta disease from eatin 2 many beans
think he can battle me,but like da CELTICS i got
2many green...
6/10
got a 8-2 record go head n make dat 8-3
cuz woop ass so good n water u couldn't even SEA me
4/10
man u a weiny like da oscar mayor hot dog car
n gettin drinks from club is da only time u c a good BAR
6/10
u weak n it ain't no other way 2 explain diss
n u gone b in outer space after i kick URANUS
2/10
n ain't nuttin much 2 say 2 nigga dat got it all
but me...not u if u was KOBE u couldn't ball
2/10
n like da laundry detergant dats ALL wiped out diss dirt spot
cuz ya beats wouldn't b BUMPIN if it was infected wit CHICKEN POXS...
6/10


I leave u flatter the diet Sprite in the height of ur life, this kid couldn't fight if he was Lennox's wife/
U softer then a banana thats way past ripe, duz this kid have arthritis or is it he just cant type??/
6/10
Grab a knife and rip through u, leave blood on ur shirt and mistake it for tomatoe soup/
U as fruity as Toucan and as crunchy as Fruit Loops, I'm more dangerous then a room full of Iraqi troops/
7/10
Too slick for a mass measurement cuz "ton's" of laughs "pound" ur skull to a 5 : 1 "scale" ratio/
Ur like stale radio, stop with the comments, take a request and go to commercials u crazy hoe...
6/10
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traight to the point
My styles SICK, i cant help that im talkin infectious
Guess im on some next shit, schemin on ya necklace..
5/10
Rapz? I bust constant like seiman ya bitch be catchin
A cypher artist, battlin... yea, i can also rip dis section
6/10
But you when you spit, i tend to hear much laughs
Stay calm dawg, cuz lyrically ill rip u like rough drafts!!
6/10

This battle was ok came down 2 harder punches and better wordplay and more complexity

Ice u had the overall better verse but ya stucture iz fucked u need 2 work on that

Drag you started off good but u jus fell off after the 1st bar
Stay Consistent
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