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Old 08-13-04, 04:23 PM   #11
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Voted For: Paramik

Paramik wins this shit easy. Boomer had a weak bar that was kind of a played out punch. Structure was fucked up too. Dont try to do multis the whole verse. Change the rhyme so the reader doesnt get bored. Paramik takes this with a much better punchline.

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