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Old 08-13-04, 07:26 PM   #18
Logic The Goonie
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Voted For: One-Man-Band

ok easy vote for omb even tho he embarrassed me in the cypher! j/k but he was the only one really going with the topic. boomer, when your in a topical battle, it isnt ur job to diss the other guy, ur just supposed to write a rap about the topic. omb, you can still work on the structure cuz if you notice ur font is super small and still goes to the end of the line sumtimes so its more than a lil streched. but overall good story. boomer regardless of your topical mishaps, you need to work on structure and flow first, then help your punchlines out. links in tha sig. no hate.
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