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Old 08-13-04, 07:46 PM   #10
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse

didn't care for verbal's structure but the personal's were hittin:

I Scowered Roster To Roster, For JDOT's Tollerable Lyrics. Theres Few In The Mood.
No Wonder His Sig Dont Rep His Family Fued, These Members Have Crews In Their Crew.

Check Their Forum For Bordem, Its Time To Put Ends To This Fam.
IDK How Their Shit Hits Fans? Your Beef Aint Even Beef...Its Spam.

don't get me wrong.. j dot's rhyme was cool but it didn't seem personal enough that's why i'm giving it to VA... both need to add more wordplay and multi's, metas... good shyt... VA barely got this
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