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Old 08-13-04, 10:38 PM   #13
M&rk
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Voted For: saaran

for crediablitly some rappers reiterate a sound
for credability your an og from a made up town
...nice set up to the punch, big puch
thats disgusting,the way you accepted, itellectually
i'm above all emcee, verbally and textually
...good flow, not feelin da self glor
ask to have sex wit me, just to have rap in you
muscle tissue dosnt matter i retract all sineu
....first line nice, secound, whats a sineu?
ive seen ya verses played and awfully structred
your verse sucks PERIOD, even if its un-puncterd
.....nice wordplay,
how you win??? mm dats a blunder now...
face down six feet under, ya dats how you underground
...wordplay, but played punch

.........
og-
Try talking to me i won't let you
if you do i'll have my boyz from the bucket get you
... not a punch
cuz you think ur hardcore when you're really not
i know this for a fact you wouldn't meet me at the spot
....how do u know that for a fact?
that i pointed out on the map
you were probably takin a nap
u better be readin this while i'm takin my piss
and your still think about what to write
Holla back

... ya no closer, and no punch. read other battle to get a hang of this and to know what a punch is.

HIT MY BATTLE UP VS. DUSTY IN MY SIG!!!!!!!!!
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