Here was the first impression: first guy had good similies..probably too much, and mic-wrecker had more punches....so I am reading this again and analysing line by line. Here's Rising's rubric
Punches
Flow
Literary terms-metaphors, wordplays, and similies

Punches go to Delinquent just because he had the best punch in this whole battle. THis battle had good punches but were too played out.
Delinquient had one good punch. It's quality not quantity. All your other ones flowed well but they were simple and played out. You need more original stuff like your closer.
times-up like jadakiss, over like lil flip~
~and like a preview of a movie, you'll get-a-clip~6/10
run for the hills, when that fuckin banana-spew~
~like mad cow desease, this is a piece of beef you dont wanna-chew~5/10
~show you the definition-of-pain, let these punches poisen and manifest~
~ill be damned if you rest, cause im leave you smokin like canibus~6.5/10
~and-a-fist in ya nose, cause bitch i got the scariest-visions~
~leave ya rhymes watered down like i sprayed ya raps wit various-liquids~5/10
dont need no canvass, im real to paint-on~
~even if jesus is ya homeboy like teenage millionaire, ill have ya head off like saint-john~9/10
Mic-wrecker
More creative but your punches were just as played out as his.
i portray greatness, u on the other hand just rely on subliminal things//
get blown to smitherines ya linez culdnt cut me if i took a nap on a gullotine//7/10
nigga weak bars are only gonna get herbs on here to dick ryde an model yu//
n'stead of absorbin it n her puss ya momz shulda just swallowed yu// 6.5/10
these niggaz on here got ya head hype thinkin ya flow is the shit//
but all you get from me iz boo'z like william hung in front of an appolo audience//6/10
but im done with chu caz its clear in my mind that u a bitch to me//
i culd dress like osama an u culd b bush an u still wuldnt want "war" wit me//6.5/10
Flow-I give it to Delinquent by just a bit cause he had more multies and better structure...but both flowed well while couple lines were bad.
Literary Terms-Delinquent with a lot of similies and wordplays. But I think Mic-wreckers was a little more complex but that doesnt always win you the battle. Sorry if I made any bad calls....good battle pz...
Rising Sun aka Mike12Ikeda

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