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Old 08-14-04, 12:15 AM   #9
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Voted For: Ice Pick

Ice Pick you took this with complexity and multies...I didn't get everything like your wordplays but your punches definitely hit much harder than his. I liked these lines
somebody Told-U-Wrong..U can's spit wit 'ICE..ya' Breathing'z Fatigued
9 BATTLEZ..6 of 'em loss's??..Dot thinks he is Leadin-da-League
on ya' forehead CONCUSIONZ "project" visualz dat Must-be-STARZ
DOTS a Primate..but i agilely "flip" on his Monkey Barz
leavin' Flunkiez Scarred..ya' "dissected" TRACKZ??..i RAN-thru-in-SECTIONZ
like "crazed" PROCTOLOGISTZ..ICE will HANNed-U-ya- RECTUM......
You got the win because you were more complex, deeper meaning behind each bar, but you gotta work on the consistency in ur flow. pz
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