aww, this was so sad,if its true then i'm sorry bout what happend to ya friend, but keep writing and lettin those feelings fly gurl, the only tips i have for you would be your structure and flow, try to match up the lines a bit, you know? make em more evened out and you'd be str8..........nice work tho keep at it.......1

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