Hmmmmm, this was interesting, i liked it but you had no real flow or rhyme scheme, but then again its an open mic and shit happens, BTW, were you drunk or hittin the water bong when you wrote this? Not dissin just curious, it seems like you were just rollin through, and what was with the blah blah blahsss, this piece was different and good in a spoken word kinda way, again not dissin you man........................peace

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