WOW, <<<<<<wonders why this has been slept on, ok this was one of the best open mics i've seen in this thread, beautifully written, great use of vocabulary and describing the scene, imagery was there,i could picture this unfolding in my mind,it flowed nicely as well,and was just put together perfectly wow, nice job...1

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