Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin
Maku took this with better strcture and a few good punches. Chrissy, your whole rhyme style is very simple, and some of your lines didn't even rhyme. But no hate though, you just need some practice...if they don't ban you for biting first.
Vote - Maku JaiiLiin
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