Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin

opener - Maku, lol...funny shit man
closer - Maku, Very good closer, mc's didnt really go together
Personals - Maku, didnt find anything hard in mc's
multis - Tie, both had good ones
metas - Maku, didnt fine a single one in mc's verse
vocab - Maku, without a doubt had better vocab
Structure - Maku, mc's was wack

Maku: you took this one pretty easily as you can see ^^^.
Only thing I would have to say for you to elevate on is structure because some of your lines got awfully short with a long line. Eg. 2nd last bar...one had 4 words, other had 18!
but good job man, you got my vote.

MC: As for you I think you got some elevating to do. Work on wordplay firstly...use personals and punches that hit harder. A lot of the stuff you rhymed about in your verse werent even true. Eg. you talked about beating him up, being gay, calling him a pussy...etc..ya know? Use real stuff and make them whitty so the readed can laugh at it an shit. Also, I think you gotta clean up your structure a bit son...Compare yours wit Maku's and youll see...yours was hard to follow and I can prolly speak for a few other ppl that feel this way too...anyways im done

Win: Maku

PLZ DROP WITH AN HONEST VOTE ON MY BATTLE AS I DID FOR YOU...I REALLY GOTTA CLOSE THIS THING...
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...496068&posted=1

Peace...