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Old 08-14-04, 02:03 PM   #13
Onor Code
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This was feedback posted for Wite Warrior

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Change Your Structure Bro, It Needs Some Fixing. Make Lines With Your Verses, Kinda Makes The Flow Better.
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::Fallen Victims::
Jersey178[TKO]|Flip Kid [KO]
::Slipped Out My Reach::

Hit Me Hard, I Will Get Tired.. But Dont Let Me Hit The Wall- Else, Your dead.