Voted For: ShackleS

opener - Shackles, wasnt feeling Uzi's, played
closer - Shackles, hahaha...funny shit man
punches - Shackles, Uzi's were weak
personals - Neither, didnt really see anything good
multis - Uzi, Shackles didnt have any
metas - Shackles, had one in almost every bar
structure - Shackles, A lot cleaner + easier to read
vocab - Shackles, he had a consistantly moderate vocab

Shackles: You took this one dawg. One of the neatest structured verses I've seen in a while. Plus you used so many metaphors, that gave your overall verse a good look. Vocab was consitant and punches were hard and effective. Great job. Just work on personals and multis because I didnt really see either of them in this verse man, elevate in those areas.

Uzi: I think you need some elevating to do in these areas...
Personals...I didnt really see any in your verse.
openers/closers...coulda been way better than you did.
vocab...was alright but also coulda been better
metas...didnt really see anything good in your verse.
-You gotta make your verses less self-glorifying because thats what you did for the most part of your spit...
ppl dont wanna listen about how good you are...we wanna see an actual battle, your supposed to be dissing your opponent. When you did attemp to diss Shackles, I feel your punches were weak and didnt pull through...theres another area to work on.

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