The Original Half Ass King
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IP:
Voted For: Word processor
opener - word, haha funny shit...
closer - Graceful, wasnt really feelin Words
punches - Word, gracefuls were played, not original
personals - Graceful, most of his verse was all personals
metas - Word, had better metas in my opinion
multis - Word, had'em in first 2 bars
vocab - word, gracefuls biggest word was elevator...which is what he should be doin (elevating)
Graceful: Most of your stuff was played, and the stuff that wasnt was kinda stupid cause most of your punches obviously revolved around you reading his profile...you can do better than that, elevate with multis/metas, vocab/especially punches.
Word: you took this one man...I felt your verse was a lot stronger because you has great structure, multis, and way harder punches. Elevate with better personals and maybe harder punches, good job tho man...props...
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