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Ya mom massages my nuts
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Voted For: ATMOSPHERE
Not the greatest topicals........
Lil trip....your story's imagery wasn't good and the biggest thing in a topical is imagery the way you worded it made it difficult to picture, you flow was alil off and I don't know what that was before the verse just don't do it again
INgenis........Somewhat better than his in imagery but was still kinda lagging, flow was tight throughout, well structured as well and it had decent emotion so you pretty much took this
Vote: Ingenius
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Haters spend all they time hating on another's life
Then wonder why when presenting there's to others...no one looks twice
Because at the end of the day, you get what you give
So, when you consumed with his...don't get mad when everyone else is
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