The Original Half Ass King
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IP:
Voted For: Ill-Grammatix
opener - Diesel, Ill's wasnt that good
closer - Ill, was way better
punches - Ill, were a lot harder
personals - Neither, neither had any I was feelin
multis - Ill, had a lot
metas - Ill, also had a lot
vocab - Ill, very good vocab man
structure - Tie, both were good
Ill: your takin this one man, I just didnt really like the opener as much, and you didnt have any strong personals. Elevate in those areas and you should be all good...
Diesel: I just didnt really like your overall verse in my honest opinion because it seemed like it was the kinda rhyme that you coulda used against any cats on here ya know...you had no personals and I didnt really see any original stuff in there, it was all played...better luck next time I guess...
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