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Old 08-14-04, 03:22 PM   #21
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Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

Both of you delivered a good verse......

ripper.. your structure was kinda hard to read......flow wasn't great either...........multies were there but didn't build up into nay personals......although you had sum decent punches......

The Kid P-Dizzle...your flow and structure were good and you delvered sum real nice punches....and a u had a cuple good personals......I really liked this drop sum funny shyt.........
i liked these 4 lines:

But physically, I'll rip Jack another asshole
You say you thug but you's prolly a Donnie Brasco (an undercover)
You shouldn't even be allowed in here like Castro
In the U.S, you just give men coke treatments - fast blow
funny shyt man.....nice

Vote:The Kid P-Dizzle