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Old 08-14-04, 03:29 PM   #14
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Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

P-Dizzle - you had some pretty good shit in there...some forced rhyming but I saw good concepts you just didnt form some of them well. you had some nice multis that actually flowed instead of sounding like you forced them out. Nothing really stunning but you had a nice flow to it and it was a good battle verse

Vicious Beast - after I read the first bar I knew you were gonna lose...mad basic...forced rhyming... this is not hate at all so I dont wanna see you go hate vote on one of my battles out of spite or some shit Im jsut saying...nothing in there that was good...read the tutorials and keep elevating. youll get better.
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