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Old 08-14-04, 03:40 PM   #22
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Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

Yo I liked both verses I thought ripper was gon win it till I read K-P's finisher stronger finish but u shud work on the beginning and middle cuz ifg ripper had a gd finisher he wud have won. ripper dnt put '//' at the end of ur lines it's newbish retun da fav. http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=142371
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