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Old 08-14-04, 03:41 PM   #14
TURBAN
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Voted For: chatter box

i'll go with chatterbox on this one , a lil to long though ha i got bored half way down , dont write so much unless its keen to the win but i think you coulda beat him in half of what you wrote so yea , but otherwise other guy you need better punches and more personals and a better structure






turban

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