alright....this piece was weak as fuck...not much of anything...no metaphors...hardly any punchlines...no wordplay...you had structure..and even that was too simple...by the way....I'm also white...why announce that....stop actin like black people care if your white or not...if you can spit..you can...if you can't...you can't...don't use your color as an excuse..

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