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Old 08-15-04, 12:57 AM   #14
~Luciano~
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Voted For: ...God...


yo u cant't see me, like a pain in ya vision
if u GOD, then u can bet im changin religion
if we both got the metal lets dance
but u'll wind up in the dirt like the vegetable plants
6/10
i come sick wit it every time i drop
no infra-red for ya cuz ya rhymes not HOT
but forget about how the ruegers blam
cuz GOD "flow" about as well as the Hoover Dam
7/10
yo i got mad connections, n u lack perception
i'll send ya ass roamin like bad reception
my way is dope, while u relay for hope
if u GOD, then why u gotta pray for votes??
6/10
u betta reckognize, when u see the weapon rise
that shit will make this punk nigga TESTIFY
that im the betta guy
n im more of a MC than u is what my text implys
6/10
u lights n the camera, but neva the action
keep on comin bet we gon b clashin
dog u new to this, u not used to this
u get multiple shots to ya humorous
5/10
rather ya fibula, dog i get rid of ya
evicted out ya home at RAPVERSE i cant live wit ya
u extra weight im about to drop some pounds
only way u on the streets is if i knocked u down
5/10
but fuck u, im movin on to real ventures
cuz i wouldnt BITE ya rhymes wit a pair of steel dentures
u a MC that i dont try to botha wit
punk bitch, who mo pussey than a ginacologist
6/10
I aint done dissin so stay tuned ya bitch
watch me CAN this wack MC like some tunafish
the number one spot, u dont hold that well
got the Mitchell n NEss glock it "throwback shells"
5/10
i dont play around u get split wit axe
u get hit in the legs now limp wit that
eh this guy just admit the fact
that GOD gon need ALLAH n BUDDHA to win this match
5/10HAAAAAAA
i wouldnt sweat u in a sauna.....
test me if ya wanna BITTTTCH
3/10

Ya punches were played and simple and ya structure was kinda stretched and off
Ok wordplay
Overall 50/100


To rhyme on your level bitch i'd have to be asleep...
On weed, OD'ed on E and LSD...
Don't fucking come to me with your pussy jealousy...
6/10
I'll sell a key, go tell a 'G' to just cap your ass...
I'd do it myself, but fuck jail 'B', i ain't going back...
It's a fact, your rhymes steam cause that's what terds'll do...
Small limp-dicked faggot got to duck to piss...
Better stab me in the eye quick, cause after reading your shit...
7/10
I'm bout to do it to myself, faggot, don't jock my dick...
There ain't no skill behind your name if you count both people...
Like Blair Witch you got me wondering why there's a sequel...
You scared of evil, riding up under your skin like a needle ...
I'll promise i'm your biggest fan and take you out like a Beatle...
7/10
Set all jokes aside, like your rhyme book when I read it...
Accept it, I'm terminating this cat easier than a vet visit...
I'm God, Bring the dopeness in bags to suffocate you...
Everybody on the forums hate you and degrade you...
6/10
Escape to, foreign lands where G rocks grandma pants...
The ceiling is the only place you'll ever find fans...
Leave your body lost in Hills like Beverly, do it cleverly...
Your endeavor resulted in your surrender, G...
6/10
Thinkin' you dope, gimme a break, you fuckin' suck...
You couldn't see my ass if I caused a full moon to erupt...
7/10
Overall better wordplay and better punches
ok wordplay
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