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Old 08-15-04, 02:06 AM   #17
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Voted For: Wrecker

Quote:
Originally Posted by Wrecker
Yeh Not Knowin Things Kid, Coz Your Verse Is Pure ASSumption..
And Ye Swingin Blindly, Coz "The Kid" Ain't Seen, Like In Abortions..
doesnt rhyme but i liked the second line

So Check My Numbers, Coz Like A Math Teacher, I'mma Set Yeh Order,
N Don't Be Surprised, Coz I'll Break "P's" (peace) Like A Taliban Supporter..
no...

Way Outta Yer Sight Kid, Coz The Only Punches Yeh Landin Is On Street Fighter..
So Watch Out, Coz Wrecker Will Erase "Dizzle", Like A West Coast Novel Writer..
ehh...pretty good first line second line was decent

Kid Am Always Above Yeh, So On My Entrance, This Herbs Bowin Down To Knees..
And You Cant Stop Wreck, Coz I'll Make P (pee) Burn Slowly, Like People Wit STD's..
nice closer

wheres your other bar? you had some decent shit except your second bar...nothing that jumped off the page at me but it was enough for the win...



Quote:
Originally Posted by The Kid P-Dizzle
I'm bout to wreck ya, just like I did to your mother's placenta
And your pops? He's the reason you at the rape crisis centa (center)
made me laugh...decent opener...(sidebar: placenta is what is attached to your stomach by your umbillical cord when you are born...its not in the woman until shes pregnant. i let it slide because biggie's said it before but it doesnt technically make any sense)

Don't pretend ta (to), act tough, you'll get smack up 'cuz you're not that
You should stop that, you're all up on my nuts like a jockstrap
played...

Dizzle killed this shit, but 5 bars is more awkward than your mom tellin' her parents you were illigitimate
not that nice of a closer...

5 bars = 10 lines...i wouldve voted for him because of that but his wasnt 5 bars either...you had a good thing going with your first bar but then the rest of it fell off...i voted on some other battle of yours and you came way harder...did you underestimate him here?


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