Originally Posted by Wrecker
Yeh Not Knowin Things Kid, Coz Your Verse Is Pure ASSumption..
And Ye Swingin Blindly, Coz "The Kid" Ain't Seen, Like In Abortions..
doesnt rhyme but i liked the second line
So Check My Numbers, Coz Like A Math Teacher, I'mma Set Yeh Order,
N Don't Be Surprised, Coz I'll Break "P's" (peace) Like A Taliban Supporter..
no...
Way Outta Yer Sight Kid, Coz The Only Punches Yeh Landin Is On Street Fighter..
So Watch Out, Coz Wrecker Will Erase "Dizzle", Like A West Coast Novel Writer..
ehh...pretty good first line second line was decent
Kid Am Always Above Yeh, So On My Entrance, This Herbs Bowin Down To Knees..
And You Cant Stop Wreck, Coz I'll Make P (pee) Burn Slowly, Like People Wit STD's..
nice closer
wheres your other bar? you had some decent shit except your second bar...nothing that jumped off the page at me but it was enough for the win...
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