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Old 08-15-04, 11:44 AM   #10
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Voted For: intensify effect

too easy...

1) bommer never dropped the required 5 bars
2) structure and flow was garbage
3) shyt barely rhymed
4)no punches or personals
5) no metas or multis
6) no vocab or wordplay... elevate 360 degrees... ya need it bad, playa

ie:
ok structure and flow
shyt rhymed... thank the stars above...lol
punches need work... played concepts
no multi's... not needed but adds to the effect
little word play... again played concepts
ok closer

boomer got merked
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