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Voted For: Lethal Lunatic
Lethal Lunatic
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. wordplay is decent.. a few of ur punches connected.. decent personals..
BiG-WhIt3y
structure isnt very good.. not a lot of consistency with ur line lengths.. flow fell off due to the lack of consistency.. no multis.. wack wordplay.. none of ur punches connected.. no good personals..
Overall
neither had multis.. Lethal Lunatic had the better structure.. the better flow.. better wordplay.. more connecting punches.. and better personals.. so basing off of that.. Lethal Lunatic gets my vote..
VOTE - LETHAL LUNATIC
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