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Old 08-15-04, 02:12 PM   #10
E Looch
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This was feedback posted for KroNuz

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decent verse overall

opener was probably ya best lines to me the closer was pretty decent to but the rest of ya verse i didnt feal to much really an didnt feal how u kept talkin about the same disses about crews an vets just reworded punchs should have just used a different topic an would have made the verse better to me not that bad of a drop though just change up topics instead of playin off the same shit the whole verse
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