Voted For: $ Wordman $

you took it better word play , that last line stole it , dontget me wrong schema i liked it but it wasnt as raw as wordman's but nice structure schema use better words in your rhymes


finish this he's a biter
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=142418

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