Voted For: Phantom
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bang:ya verse was ok overall, structure was off, made it hard to follow, wich in turn messed with ya flow a bit, so i would say to just work on that, but punches were ok,
phantom:ya verse was good, you had good punches, some were funny,the herb line and the opener with the smiley, ya flow and strucure were good too, nice job
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hantom