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Old 08-15-04, 07:23 PM   #21
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Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

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manipulation; ya verse was good,nice flow and structure, ya wordplay is good here too, i liked ya opening bar,and i thought the chrome line was clever, nice job...
intensify:ya verse was good too, but ya structure was off a bit tho which made it not flow right, but overall was an ok verse, both had good punches, but ima have to give this to :
manipulation~because of flow and harder punches
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