Voted For: Wrecker

we got ourselves an up and comer

And Ye Swingin Blindly, Coz "The Kid" Ain't Seen, Like In Abortions..
N Don't Be Surprised, Coz I'll Break "P's" (peace) Like A Taliban Supporter..
So Watch Out, Coz Wrecker Will Erase "Dizzle", Like A West Coast Novel Writer..
And You Cant Stop Wreck, Coz I'll Make P (pee) Burn Slowly, Like People Wit STD's..
^^^your hot punches, or wordplay lines, all u need to work on is your lead in lines cuz they were all pretty gay and didn't lead into the next punch, if u lead into puches it can make your lines shorter and your puches more wittier and hit harder.
...... hot verse regardless

the kid...... u needed to come wit personals like wrecker, i would list the lines of your i liked but i dont like any of 'em.
so every catagory goes to wrecker.........
thanks for votin on my battle ,but u did say honest vote, and i agree wit that and speak wit my actions.
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wrecker return wit an honest vote on this battle, g'luck wit your other battles. http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=142432

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