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Old 08-15-04, 08:36 PM   #6
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Voted For: Ice Pick

Igniting this fag, im a superhero, you're biting your fans,
And When I Steal Your Computer...Your Life's In My Hands!
--good opener, originality

This is his-written-demise, where sparks and disses-will-fly
Then afterwards, you'll see the shape of my boot in BX-eyes!
-- not really feelin this one...filler line

Im hitting-him-twice, posted something dope and left-him-confused
But i could post a wack verse and use your style better-than-you!
-- ok...played concept... heard this one plenty of times

He's wrecked-and-abused, explains why he's easily-maimed
BX chipped in with his two cents, and actually received-change!
--again... played concept... heard it all before

Unworthy of any more-than-herpes. known to start absurd, worthless beef
Look, I bet you were dope two years ago...but then again, so were Furbies!
--laugh factor...not really a hard punch but funny as shyt

Ya virgin ass couldn't finger a hole if you played the flute
Your the type of cat who shaves his pubes just to say he's smooth!
ehhh...ok, i guess... nothin spectacular


The finisher
Knew I Was Gonna Fuck You Up Before I Met You Like A Rape Target!
I’m disrespecting you too , I Clamp The Strap u aint no Escape Artists
^^^over my head, here... didn't get it at all


Hardly-dope, Melt your chances down until I see this cube(ice) no longer floats
Hes a herb but more like a Vegetable the way he mastered the Art o’ Choke(art of choke)
-- nice opener! good wordplay
^^^^^^^^^he needs to face the facts…Im the lawn mower and hes the grass
Cause hes a true herb when .Im uprooting and replanting his whackass
-- already called him a herb in bar one... repetitive

Go to a orthodontist..cause he spits so much whack shit his teeth is rotten(sig)
You’re a herb….drill your cavities is the only way to get to the root-of-the-problem...
--that's herb #3... i see a pattern forming...

We got BEEF..ill use this ICE PICK to rid of it between my teeth
………….I like WINter too..but unlike ICE…hes afraid of HEAT
-- wack line... filler...blah!

Your Like a Pond frozen over..its not HOT but it LOOKS nice
…….Your like a Tooth PICKs the way your walkin on THIN ice….
--toothpick lines are thrown at him in almost every battle try something else... also an awful closer

Ice had the overall better verse here but he definitely slacked off from other posts... BXP keep doing you... if ya woulda kept hitting like that first bar ya woulda had him beat...

drop a vote on my battle against the "Great" Harvest crew... see sig for link... thanks in advance (2 against one... and I'll still merk 'em)
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