You needed to be a little clearer....I could hardly make out what you were saying. A lot of the shit you were saying was kinda played (pubic hair line). Need a little more breath control.....sounded like you were breathing in deep at times. You can hide that a little if you get a mic filter or just put a sock over it. Flow was OK at times and off at others. Work on your consistency......nice drop though
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