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Old 08-15-04, 08:50 PM   #8
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Voted For: Wrecker

Yeh Not Knowin Things Kid, Coz Your Verse Is Pure ASSumption..
And Ye Swingin Blindly, Coz "The Kid" Ain't Seen, Like In Abortions..
--wack opener...work on it

So Check My Numbers, Coz Like A Math Teacher, I'mma Set Yeh Order,
N Don't Be Surprised, Coz I'll Break "P's" (peace) Like A Taliban Supporter..
---nice second line but the set-up was blah!

Way Outta Yer Sight Kid, Coz The Only Punches Yeh Landin Is On Street Fighter..
So Watch Out, Coz Wrecker Will Erase "Dizzle", Like A West Coast Novel Writer..
---wack... filler lines

Kid Am Always Above Yeh, So On My Entrance, This Herbs Bowin Down To Knees..
And You Cant Stop Wreck, Coz I'll Make P (pee) Burn Slowly, Like People Wit STD's..
---ok closer... again, setup was wack


I'm bout to wreck ya, just like I did to your mother's placenta
And your pops? He's the reason you at the rape crisis centa (center)
--ehh... ya get a pass for that one

Don't pretend ta (to), act tough, you'll get smack up 'cuz you're not that
You should stop that, you're all up on my nuts like a jockstrap
--played, on the wack side... elevate ya skill level here

Dizzle killed this shit, but 5 bars is more awkward than your mom tellin' her parents you were illigitimate
--one line stretched into 2... not a good closer

ok... neither one of you dropped the required 5 bars... just so you know... a bar consists of 2 lines... one line is NOT a bar!

Wrecker took this easy with better rhymes and flow... wordplay was also better... not much of it but it was cool when it came out

P-diz... stop listening to Kurtis Blow...lol..kidding... but yeah, ya style was "going way back" like stetsasonic and the cold crush brothers... come to da light homie... keep elevatin
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