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Voted For: Red Bull
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redbull:ya verse was good, you had nice structure and flow here, ya punches were decent and stronger than your opponents, i liked the opener and the rhyme sheme you used, nice job.........
natedogg:this was ok, you should try and work on your flow and strucure, and incorporate rhymes and spell check, no hate, just some elevation tips homey.......
vote:redbull
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