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Old 08-15-04, 11:32 PM   #14
fluidmoon
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Voted For: String9487

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string:your verse was good, nice flow, punches, and structure,i liked your opening lines,eminem lines are played but you said something i haven't heard which was good,overall good verse throughout, i also liked the sneaks line too, good job......
big-whitey:i liked your verse too, nice opening lines also, flow and structure were good too, i just think string took this cause of wordplay
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