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Old 08-16-04, 12:04 AM   #9
fluidmoon
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Voted For: Mimesis

yo:
mimesis~your verse was real good, your flow,structure, the imaginitive words you used,nice hard punches, and personals as well, i enjoyed reading this,nice play off his name too and the whole rhyme scheme...good job
Emergin~your verse wasnt bad, it was good too,but i dont think it was as strong as mimesis verse, you both kinda had streched lines, but,not too bad, keep doin ya thing..
vote:mimesis
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