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Old 08-16-04, 12:24 AM   #14
fluidmoon
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse

verbal abuse:your verse was strong here, you had nice punches and multies, i liked the choice of creative and imaginitive words in this verse, i mean that it is different from what i'm used to seeing in frontlines, i can tell you know what your doing, i liked you opening lines and the personals against your opponent, i thought the spam line and your closer were best.....nice job
j dot: your verse had nice flow and structure, i just dont think it was as strong as verbal's verse, although i did like your last 3 lines, they were the strongest
Vote:verbal abuse due to wordplay,punches and strong vocab
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